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Thursday, 30 November 2017

Writing: Narrative

14: A frightening experience

Ben is a competitive individual with an iron will and is willing to jump in for his friends if they are in danger. He also can be very loud and disruptive in class frequently being sent to detention.Ben has very long hair causing people to mistake him for a female. He has tan skin with high cheek bones and is considered handsome mostly hinted by how girls act around him.He is tall for his age and has a slim build. In terms of spirit in everything he does none come close to his determination. He is a very skilled athlete and most of the sports he easily masters but academically he is below average. Ben always carries a  necklace around he uses as a bracelet that he was given to by his grandfather that recently passed away. Although Ben normally fails at his grades his skill in sports and his unbreakable spirit makes up for it.


On an incredibly sunny afternoon Ben was slowly strolling through the streets from school. He finally reached his destination but he needed to cross, unfortunately the road was busy. He decided to take a different, more cautious route.  He had just recently came from detention and the glorious sun was setting. Suddenly Ben plummeted to the ground in an instance. He picked himself up and turned to face an acquaintance from school. Ben realized that him tripping over was no accident and immediately recognized the face of the attacker. It was tyson and seemed more obnoxious than usual. Tyson is a tall young man with a muscular build,he has a tendency of disrespecting teacher's and using his peers as punching bags. He also is a talented athlete and is normally picked for sports teams. He has a steel hard grudge with Ben since he is resistant to tyson’s overwhelming strength. “What was that for!” yelled Ben with all his breath that possibly could be heard from a mile away.

Tyson slowly recovered from the suppressing blast of sound Ben emitted. Without saying a word Tyson firmly gripped onto Ben’s shoulder and pushed him over again with no hesitation.
Once again Ben came back to his feet and struck a devastating blow at tyson. “Crack” The sound of tysons jaw shattering echoed through the streets. “Aaaggghhhh!” shouted Tyson in agony. “ You’ll pay for that!”. Tyson straight after the punch occurred struck back but with less accuracy than Ben. Ben countered his fist with relative ease and pushed his whole arm back. After Tyson stuttered and was pushed away Ben sends a barrage of punches with speed too fast for the naked eye to keep track of.  


Ironically Tyson dropped on the ground with a loud “thud!” and almost instantaneously got to his feet. Ben was was quite glad about being able to knock down Tyson and had a wide grin on his face that could be regarded as creepy. Tyson however was furious and his dense skin was damaged by concrete path. Tyson, blood dripping slowly from his arm onto the path charged at Ben with all his might. Ben easily dodged his futile attack and kicks him in the stomach. Tyson fell to the ground dramatically

Ben was relieved that the fight was over and calmly continued on his path. “Huff,huff,huff,huff!” Tyson breathed heavily. His arm had finally stopped bleeding and had accepted defeat. Ben peered back and shrugged his shoulders as if nothing happened and kept walking. Tyson struggled to get up to his feet but could manage. Tyson covered his wound on his arm and hurried back home. Not long after Ben had finally arrived home and saw his mother arms folded with steam coming from her ears just by trying to contain her violent fury. Ben quivering with fear slowly made his way inside.

After the fight Tyson promised that he would never bother Ben or any student since he is always terrified just by remembering that day. Ben however was punished severely by his parents after they eventually discovered why Ben delayed. From experiencing the fight both Ben and Tyson vowed never to pick fights with or rush to quick decisions easily.


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